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Article opening feedback: Token Math Review the headline, deck, and opening paragraph for readers of Every, an AI-focused publication. Identify the strongest idea, assess the framing and wording, and give concise editorial feedback with suggested replacement copy where useful. Use the rest of the draft as context. Preserve the factual qualifications. Use Every’s house style: headlines should...
Article opening feedback: Token Math
Review the headline, deck, and opening paragraph for readers of Every, an AI-focused publication. Identify the strongest idea, assess the framing and wording, and give concise editorial feedback with suggested replacement copy where useful. Use the rest of the draft as context. Preserve the factual qualifications.
Use Every’s house style: headlines should express the most interesting or surprising claim in concise, punchy language that mostly fits an email subject line. Let the dek develop the headline with a clear implication or detail. Headlines can be bold, with qualifications developed in the body. The first sentence should be strong and catchy, and continue naturally from the hed/dek. Any problems you find you should explain and offer alternatives.
The draft is frozen below. This case is for editorial feedback; it does not ask for a whole-article rewrite.
Headline selection captured in the source
HED: Token Math
Alt Hed: How Many Tokens are Too Many?
DEK: What’s the ROI on experimentation?
Alt DEK: When expensive experimentation is worth it and when to rein your tokenmaxxing in.
Opening paragraph
Often if you are the highest spender at your company you might think about reining yourself in. But when it comes to tokens, Every CEO Dan Shipper thinks everyone else should consider ramping up. He consumes more than three times as many tokens as the next-highest user at the company. The size of the gap has him wondering whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough with AI.
Full draft without comments
HED: Token Math
DEK: What’s the ROI on experimentation?
Often if you are the highest spender at your company you might think about reining yourself in. But when it comes to tokens, Every CEO Dan Shipper thinks everyone else should consider ramping up. He consumes more than three times as many tokens as the next-highest user at the company. The size of the gap has him wondering whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough with AI.
Every’s OpenAI token leaderboard (Screenshot courtesy of Laura Entis.)
The goal isn't tokenmaxxing, or the practice of torching tokens for sport. Instead, he wants to give people room to experiment with radical new strategies and ways of working that, should they pan out, could vastly improve their productivity and more than justify the token costs.
In a conversation with head of platform Willie Williams, the two settled on a tangible starting point: use AI to attack the engineering team’s bottlenecks, see how far they get, and only then do the token math.
Inside Every
Token budgets at the frontier
Dan’s encouragement to experiment comes with an expectation: When people spend company money, they should assess what that spending produced and whether they could be more efficient next time.
Turning that philosophy into spending decisions falls to head of operations Arielle Shipper. For now, she evaluates expensive runs case by case, using the results to decide when to keep funding the work and when to change course.
Her early-warning system is the company card. She keeps the ChatGPT automatic credit refill relatively low, so an unusually rapid succession of charges tells her that someone is building or testing something big.
When she’s alerted to changes over the set amount Arielle typically asks the team on Slack if anyone is in the middle of a particularly big run or check the usage leaderboard and message the people at the top. “Then Dan always responds, ‘It’s me running Ultra.’” she says, which explains why he’s always on the top of the leaderboard.
A common occurrence. (Screenshot courtesy of Laura Entis.)
She wants answers to three questions: What did the run cost? What did it buy us? And what did we learn?
The team has started offering these retrospectives unprompted. After a string of Astra experiments racked up billions of tokens, head of video Randy Counsman messaged her detailing what had worked, what hadn’t, and what he’d learned—which, it turns out, was a lot.
More on that below.
Data point
4.5 billion
That’s how many OpenAI tokens Randy burned through in an attempt to make a 3D model of his face with Astra.
The project started innocently enough: Inspired by social media posts of impressive-looking AI-generated demos made with Blender, a free 3D tool, he wanted to try it himself. Experimenting with AI, after all, is an important component of his job.
Using strategies shared on X, he set up an orchestrator agent to maintain the plan, an implementer to assign tasks, and subagents to execute them, and instructed Codex to keep looping through improvements until the model was “implemented very well,” Randy says. In retrospect, “It was an ambiguous goal.”
Then he let the model run. And run. And run.
By the time he pressed pause on the project, the token spend was in the billions and the result was, as he puts it, “very janky.”
The output, rendered in four different shaders. (Image courtesy of Randy Counsman.)
An AI audit of his Codex sessions revealed some glaring inefficiencies: Layers of agents passed growing amounts of context back and forth, including messages checking whether a subagent had completed a task. He’d unwittingly created a compute-hungry “unruly swarm” of agents.
Randy has since rebuilt his project setup. He dropped the implementer, caped the orchestrator at five Sol subagents to control costs, and built in explicit feedback checkpoints. For a recent project, he also generated an image of the design he wanted, so a judge agent could check the model's work against a concrete target instead of an open-ended instruction to keep improving.
A failed experiment is still a good investment if it shows where an AI system falls short. Randy now has a benchmark to run new models against—how well they turn an organic 2D image into an organic 3D model—and a leaner setup to get a better result with fewer tokens.
Unwittingly large token spends via experimentation is an Every rite of passage. (Screenshot courtesy of Laura Entis.)
Try it yourself: Pick an AI task that burned through more tokens than expected and paste the following into your agent of choice:
Review the available session history and token usage records for [task/project] during [date range], including any subagent sessions.
I was trying to [goal]. The result was [what happened]. Help me understand where the tokens went and what I could do differently next time.
- Break down usage by activity and model where the records allow.
- Look for repeated work, unnecessary status checks, and large amounts of context passed between agents. Show specific examples.
- Distinguish necessary work from likely waste. Don’t assume high usage or cached input was wasteful.
- Recommend the three most useful changes to my instructions, model choices, or agent setup.
If you can’t access the records you need, tell me what to provide.
Steal this workflow
Don’t send Fable to do a Sonnet’s job
Spiral general manager Marcus Moretti’s token spend strategy is straightforward: Stay within the weekly usage limits for his Claude Code Max plan.
It’s a simple goal that requires active management; Marcus is selective about which assignments go to Fable 5.1 and which go to a cheaper model.
Here’s what that looks like in practice:
Step 1. Learn what each model is good at. Marcus has used Anthropic's models long enough to know on sight whether a job needs Sonnet, Opus, or Fable-level intelligence.
Step 2. Match the model to the assignment. Basic tasks—analytics checks, for example—go to Sonnet. Work with a clear objective, such as a tightly scoped product change, goes to Opus. For a larger feature—like the new billing implementation he’s working on—Marcus uses Fable 5.1 to develop the specification: what needs to be built and how it should work.
Step 3. For complex work, let the model delegate. Once the plan is ready, Marcus tells Fable, “Kick this off, and for all coding tasks, use your judgment about delegating to a lower model.” Fable assigns pieces to Opus and Sonnet, then checks their work. This lets the strongest model manage the project without executing every task.
Try it this week: Choose a recurring task and run it with a cheaper model than you usually use. Check whether the result meets your needs before making it your default for that task.
The daily driver
The models the team is using this week:
- Douglas Brundage, head of marketing: Using Fable 5.1 more for visual work, plus Grok Bot to monitor social media and build a tool for visuals.
- Randy Counsman, head of video: Astra (high) for complex work and medium for basic tasks; Sol (extra high) for voice mode orchestration, where Astra feels too slow and heavy-handed. Fable for code-related planning and Opus when he runs out of Astra tokens.
- Kieran Klaassen, Cora general manager: Fable 5.1 (extra high, 1M context) for coding and knowledge work, switching to Astra for some research and writing.
- Tyler Nishida, design engineer: Fable 5.1 (high) as the coordinator/orchestrator for projects in Cursor, with Grok 4.6 (extra high) subagents. Astra (ultra) for personal projects. “It’s not a model, but Cursor projects are amazing as a daily driver for your preferred models. My sidebar is so clean, and it's so much easier to manage work.”
Tyler’s Cursor setup. (Image courtesy of Tyler Nishida.)
- Katie Parrott, staff writer: “The Astra fever has broken for me,” she says. These days, she’s back to Sol (high) for task management and has switched to Claude models for writing because she finds Sol and Astra “too flat—they just report the facts instead of shaping a narrative that brings the reader along.”
- Natalia Quintero, head of consulting: Astra (medium).
- Yash Poojary, growth engineer: Astra (high) and Fable 5.1.
- Arielle Shipper, head of operations: Sol (medium). “Sol forever. SOLoyalist,” she says.
- Loren Stewart, engineer: Downgraded from Astra to Sol (medium) for coding to reduce costs and finds the switch is working well. Fable 5.1 “remains the champion thought partner.”
Token Math: feedback on the hed, dek, and opening
Bottom line
The piece has a real hook, and the current package buries it. The hook is that the person at the top of the usage leaderboard, by more than 3x, is the one telling everyone else to spend more. Neither hed says so. The dek doesn't either. The opening paragraph gets there only in sentence 2, after a slack first line. I'd move the paradox into the hed, use the dek for the guardrail ("worth it" vs. "just tokenmaxxing"), and open on the stat.
The strongest idea
The top spender is the one arguing for more spending, and the reason is ambition, not tokens. The draft's own line, "the size of the gap has him wondering whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough with AI," is the sharpest sentence in the opening. It reframes a cost story as an ambition story, and it sets up everything after it: the "not tokenmaxxing" caveat, Arielle's three questions, and Randy's 4.5-billion-token flop that still paid off.
A close second is the sequence in paragraph 4: experiment first, "only then do the token math." That's the piece's actual thesis, and the current hed only gestures at it.
Headline
Original: "Token Math"
- It's a label, not a claim. It reads like a section slug and would be a weak email subject line.
- Its payoff ("only then do the token math") doesn't arrive until paragraph 4.
- Keep the phrase, but use it in the body or as a section tag, not as the hed.
Alt: "How Many Tokens are Too Many?"
- It's a better subject line than the original, but it has two problems.
- It leans toward restraint, while the piece's surprise runs the other way (the top user wants more). It undersells the story.
- It promises a threshold the piece never gives. The body offers a method (cost, what it bought, what you learned), not a number.
- Style nit: "Are" is a verb and should be capitalized in title case.
Recommended hed: "Our CEO Wants You to Burn More Tokens" (37 characters)
- It states the surprising claim and fits an email subject line.
- It's bold on purpose. The qualifications ("should consider," "not tokenmaxxing," "case by case") belong in the dek and body, and they're already there.
- The risk is that it reads as an endorsement of tokenmaxxing. The dek below handles that.
Other options
- "How Many Tokens Are Too Few?" flips the alt hed to match the piece's real direction. It's a question, but a more surprising one.
- "Spend First, Do the Token Math Later" keeps the original phrase and states the thesis. It's slightly riskier, since it can sound like permission to be reckless. The body's guardrails (retrospectives, card-refill alerts, Marcus's usage cap) do temper it.
Dek
Original: "What's the ROI on experimentation?"
- It's a question that repeats the hed's question form and adds no detail or implication.
- "ROI on experimentation" is abstract. It doesn't say what's being experimented with, what's at stake, or who's spending.
Alt: "When expensive experimentation is worth it and when to rein your tokenmaxxing in."
- This is the better of the two. It has a clear implication and both sides of the tradeoff, and the "rein in" echo is nice.
- It pairs well with the recommended hed above.
- It's a little stiff ("expensive experimentation"). "Your tokenmaxxing" also accuses the reader.
- "Tokenmaxxing" isn't defined until paragraph 2. That's probably fine for Every's audience, but the dek shouldn't be the reader's first encounter with a term the piece has to explain.
- If the opening keeps "reining yourself in," the dek repeats it. My rewrite below drops that phrase from the opening.
Recommended dek: "When an expensive AI experiment is worth it—and when you're just tokenmaxxing."
If the hed stays a question or a label, use this stat-forward dek instead:
"Dan Shipper uses more than three times as many OpenAI tokens as anyone else at Every. The real test isn't the bill—it's what the spend produced."
Opening paragraph
What's working
- The inversion is right: the top spender says spend more.
- "Should consider ramping up" is appropriately hedged.
What's not
- Sentence 1 is the weakest in the draft. "Often if you are the highest spender at your company you might think about reining yourself in" has three hedges in a row ("often," "if," "might"). It's missing a comma after "company" and it's generic. It spends the most valuable line on a premise the reader already assumes.
- The stat is buried in sentence 3. "More than three times as many tokens as the next-highest user" is the concrete, surprising fact, and it should land in the first sentence.
- "Spender" and "consumes tokens" mix units. "Spender" implies dollars, but the leaderboard measures tokens. Pick one: "user" or "consumer."
- The scope is loose. The screenshot caption calls it Every's OpenAI token leaderboard, but the body says "next-highest user at the company." Marcus, for one, works mainly in Claude Code, so the claim needs the OpenAI qualifier to be safe.
- The caveat comes late. The reader doesn't learn this isn't about burning tokens for sport until paragraph 2, after an image. The hed and dek now carry some of that, which helps.
- The end of the paragraph is good, but the draft leans on it too little. "Whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough" is the payoff and should stay last.
Suggested replacement
Every CEO Dan Shipper uses more than three times as many OpenAI tokens as the next-highest user at the company. Most people who top their company's usage leaderboard would think about reining it in; Dan thinks everyone else should consider ramping up. The size of the gap has him wondering whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough with AI.
Lighter-touch alternative (keeps the draft's original order)
Most people who top their company's usage leaderboard would think about reining themselves in. But Every CEO Dan Shipper, who uses more than three times as many OpenAI tokens as the next-highest user at the company, thinks everyone else should consider ramping up. The size of the gap has him wondering whether the rest of us are being ambitious enough with AI.
I prefer the first version. It puts the number first, and the inversion reads as the punchline of the second sentence.
Suggested package
- HED: Our CEO Wants You to Burn More Tokens
- DEK: When an expensive AI experiment is worth it—and when you're just tokenmaxxing.
- Opening: the replacement above.
The sequence works because the hed makes the claim. The dek adds the guardrail, and the first sentence supplies the evidence for both. From there the "goal isn't tokenmaxxing" paragraph follows without a jolt.
Qualifications preserved
- "More than three times as many" is kept as-is. I didn't round it to "3x" in body copy, and I kept it out of the hed.
- "Next-highest user" is kept.
- "OpenAI" is added to match the caption. Assumption: the leaderboard is OpenAI-only. If it covers all providers, drop the word.
- Dan "thinks everyone else should consider ramping up" and is "wondering whether" the rest of us are ambitious enough. Neither line is turned into a flat assertion that people are underambitious.
- The tokenmaxxing caveat and the "case by case" evaluation remain in the body. The hed is bold, but the piece doesn't recommend spending without accountability.
- I didn't add any absolute token figures for Dan. The draft doesn't give one. If the leaderboard has one, adding it to sentence 1 would make "three times" much more concrete. The 4.5 billion figure is Randy's, not Dan's, so it shouldn't be implied as the comparison.
Out of scope, noticed in passing
- "caped the orchestrator" should be "capped."
- "Unwittingly large token spends … is an Every rite of passage" has a subject-verb mismatch. "Spends" is plural, so use "are."
- "Arielle typically asks … or check the usage leaderboard and message" has a tense and parallelism slip. It should be "or checks the usage leaderboard and messages."
- There's a double space in "Willie Williams, the two settled."